Just a quick update. Made some major format changes and added a new opening scene after sleeping on it for a few nights. Realized I was using VO as a crutch, but the new version I feel will really catch the readers/viewers attention.
The baring of souls starts right off the bat and the characters are really starting to become their own, they may be based off real people but they all must develop their own individual voice. Slowly but surely its taking place and it makes me smile.
How's it going for all my other Script Frenzy Peeps? Love to hear from you. Hit me up with a comment if you got anything to share.